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Post by Dark Yami on Mar 25, 2013 18:36:00 GMT
So i thought I'd try my hand at putting something up here i wrote a little while ago Story Title: The Green Dragon Genre: Comedy Type: Chapter (1) Blurb: David's brother Steven has been missing for the last seven years and now Steven's wife Monica calls up David up telling him that she has urgent business to discuss with him. When Monica wants to hire David as an Assistant Manager, will David be a match for the job? Rating: 13+ Link to story: darkyamithethird.deviantart.com/art/The-Green-Dragon-Chapter-One-330404477I will post up other things in the future but i want to hear what you guys think about this.
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Post by Shadowcat on Apr 7, 2013 1:15:15 GMT
Im upto the part of the noodles, so please forgive me, Il finish reading when its not 2am.
Enjoying the read so far, and I like the layout.
I would have used a Katana or Iaito sword rather than Sakabato (fictional as I belive) for the more traditional approch.
Anyway, I will finish reading tomorow (or should I say today)
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Post by Dark Yami on Apr 9, 2013 14:44:45 GMT
Ah but there's a reason i picked a Sakabato besides i know its a fiction sword but it makes it a little easier to write about when it comes to not spilling blood.
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Post by Dark Yami on Jul 2, 2013 13:28:03 GMT
So its been a while so I figured I'd post up one of my older titles here - Story Title: Vincent's Ghost Chapter 1Genre: Romace/Fantasy Type: Chapter (1) Blurb: Vincent Taylor was a normal 17 year old until he was hit by a car waiting for his friend on Christmas Eve. He awakes in the air and finds that he has been killed and is now a ghost. Its here when things get stranger when he meets another ghost called Bobby and things for Vincent wont be the same for him again. Rating: 13+ Link to story: darkyamithethird.deviantart.com/#/art/Vincents-Ghost-1-new-version-202467328?hf=1Love to know what you guys think.
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Post by Shadowcat on Jul 2, 2013 16:53:26 GMT
V.Good story mr Yami I see there are a few more chapters available so il read on tomorow
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Post by Dark Yami on Jul 2, 2013 20:07:20 GMT
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Post by Dark Yami on Jul 4, 2013 12:20:47 GMT
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